Not bad.
The two characters looked really awesome and the fight sequence was pretty cool. However, as soon as the rabbit hit the make-shift catapult, the ending was really obvious. Other than that it was a solid video. Keep up the good work.
Not bad.
The two characters looked really awesome and the fight sequence was pretty cool. However, as soon as the rabbit hit the make-shift catapult, the ending was really obvious. Other than that it was a solid video. Keep up the good work.
Thanks, I knew the ending was going to be obvious to most of the audience at that point too. The animation between that point until the launch seem to be just filler too.
Not bad.
The animation is pretty clean, and your character looks interesting. Try to make a skit or story around her next and you'll probably get a better score than what you did here. Keep up the good work; I'll be looking for it.
thank you for your constructive feedback :)
i definitely will make more out of her - she's my tan now ;).
this was the first picture i ever made of her, just to "construct" her. in fact this picture contains the whole body, including a cloak-like skirt and a huge and very epic sword :D.
i have to admit, i was just too lazy to animate the skirt and stuff floating in the wind because i think this would be very tough - especially for my first flash (not containing simple tween-test-shapes) xD. the next step i'm going to go with her is either animate the full body or imagine some movement or scenery for my chara. but i'm afraid i'm way too unimaginative for movements yet - still new to flash and anims ^_^.
Not bad, but...
This was a pretty funny, but your bleeps were way too loud. I turned the volume down a ton and they were still pretty loud. Next time try to keep everything on the same volume level. Keep up the good work.
thankyou for being honest.
I will take all of these comments into consideration like i said
I will try to improve voice quality and keep all sounds on the same level on my next animation.
Not bad.
The concept seems to be interesting, but the animation isn't as good as some on here. Keep practicing and everything will get better, and don't worry just ask nicely and I'm sure other voice actors will be happy to help. keep up the good work.
THANKS. I'VE BEEN ASKING EVERYONE, BUT THE ONLY PEOPLE I'VE FOUND ARE 2 OF MY FRIENDS AT MY SCHOOL. XD. AS FOR THE ANIMATING, I'M THINKING OF MAKING EVERYTHING 2-D AGAIN. IT SEEMED TO SLOW THE ANIMATION DOWN ON MY COMPUTER. THAT'S WHY SOME VOICING IS OFF. XD. SO, THANKS FOR YOUR CRITIQUE. (^_^).
Dude
The action scene was awesome, but i totally wasn't expecting the ending. You'd think he'd be a little more apalogetic after destroying a whole towns way of life. Oh well, it was funny as hell. Great job!
that's just the way he rolls.
Awesome.
Ahh yes another piece of comedic gold by Robert Winchester. Nicely done dude, but thre is one thing: during the dream sequence the pause button showed by itself, which stole my concentration for a few seconds. Other than that it was perfect, and the dream sequence was especially interesting. Keep up the great work!
Are you sure the mouse wasn't near the bottom of the screen at that time? It's usually a good idea to keep the mouse near the top or above the Flash window, it's only supposed to popup when the mouse hovers over it. And this is the first I've heard of it, so I'm thinking that was probably it. In any case, thanks for watching, I'm happy to hear you enjoyed it! :D
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GA Highlands College
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